Excellent piece.  I like the short vignettes that expose to light facets
of a character that many can feel but often find hard to express into
words.  To point, Yomiko's affect on Nenene as her muse brought not
only her writing to life, but gave her the fire to actually LIVE, which
I think is the point to this piece beyond the simple writer's block
emphasis.

Of course, if you read the manga, Nenene was quite an accomplished
writer before she met Yomiko, so you wonder what she did for
inspiration before that.  I guess we skipped that page, though.

Great job.

--acl

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Adam C. Leigh
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