On Oct 26, 2004, at 11:23 AM, allyn yonge wrote:

@@Misplaced modifier. Who is "Spiderwoman"? Ami or Usagi? Or
a third person? The way this is written "Spiderwoman" is talking
as "Ami" is sitting down.
@@@@

Thanks for the comments. You've actually touched on one the things 
about this story that makes it
bloody hard. Usagi's "insanity" is easier then trying to illustrate the 
fact that Ami, Spiderwoman, and Sailor Mercury are all, in essence
three seperate characters in one body and all of them can sieze control 
of any portion of the body at any time.

In this case, I've tried to illustrate that by treating Ami and 
Spiderwoman as two seperate people. I guess I didn't do very well.



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