$Yay! Another chapter of Old Acquaintance. I've been keeping up with
this on websites.
<snip>
$Despite my best effort, I couldn't pinpoint a spelling or grammar
mistake in your foreword.
Xxxxxxxxxxx
Cloudless skies allowed sunlight to shine down unimpeded upon scantily clad,
oiled bodies that gleamed under the bright orb's rays. The scent of
chlorinated water permeated everything, and the sound of local fauna, and in
some cases flora, filled the air.
$The singing daylillies were kind of pretty, Kei thought, but if the
kazoo grass didn't shut up soon, she was going to have to break out a
flamethrower and do a little yard work.
"This feels so good," Yuri cooed.
"Got that right," Kei said, not bothering to look over to her partner as she
lay on her back, allowing the sun to bombard her flesh with untamed
ultraviolet radiation, turning her skin an even darker shade. While UV
treatment centers were considered more time efficient, there was no
substitute for gaining a tan the natural way.
Even Muhgi yawned in approval, curled up in a ball and enjoying the sun,
despite being covered in nearly an inch of fur. The girls liked to call him
a warm weather cat, and he would have been inclined to agree.
Lounging on her stomach, Yuri sighed in enjoyment. Waiting above the
pleasure moon of Xyphos 13 turned out to have an upside after all. It seemed
silly for them to wait in the shot up Lovely Angel when there was a resort
complex with their name on it waiting on the surface. Best of all, they
could have the 3WA pay for it
$After they destroyed it, naturally.
since they were currently on a mission
tracking down Zeiram.
Yuri congratulated herself for being the genius to come up with the idea of
renting a room in one of the hotels and luxuriating in some of the vices the
moon had to offer. In this case they rented a private pool area right off
the hotel and were currently hard at work deepening their tans. Yuri was
dressed in a tasteful yellow one piece, while Kei, displaying her usual lack
of restraint, was decked out in a tiny two piece blue bikini. Or most of
one, since she was currently topless as she soaked up the sun's rays.
Officially, that was why they had wanted a private pool, to afford them some
measure of modesty for lounging about topless. In reality, Kei had insisted
(and Yuri agreed) that some distance between Killgore's men and them was a
good idea.
Within a half hour of their arrival, a trio of the mercenaries, including
the Samisdat assassin, Cross, had followed them down to the surface.
Supposedly, the men were due for some R+R of their own, though it was
obvious that at least one of them was near the pair at all times, trying to
look inconspicuous. While they did a good job to the casual observer, it was
obvious their real purpose was to stay close to the pair. While the private
area Yuri and Kei had rented was surrounded by a high wall on all sides, it
was only fifteen meters away from the hotel's public pool area, where Cross
and his men frequently hung out. Even a rookie fresh out of the academy
could divine the true purpose of the men. That put both of the Angels on
edge, but especially Kei, who had grown as wary of the mercenaries as Iria
since her return from Myce. While Yuri wasn't that paranoid, she didn't like
having someone keep tabs on her either.
At least there wasn't any risk of the mercenaries being armed. Weapons were
strictly prohibited on Xyphos 13. Extensive searches of every single item
leaving a ship were performed by a number of people using some of the most
expensive detection equipment in the galaxy. Anyone protesting the treatment
to any degree had to leave the planet immediately. The search was so
$Two spaces between planet and immediately.
thorough, Yuri even had to leave her bloody card behind.
$I don't think there should be a comma after thorough.
Yawning, Kei sat up, raising her arms above her head and stretching out like
a cat. Instead of lying back down, she picked up the wristband comlink Iria
had given her and spoke into it, "Hey, Bob, any change up there?"
"Nothing. Everything is still the same. No one has left the Destiny since
Cross followed you down."
$Two spaces after followed.
Yuri listened to the brief report. Some sort of interference had prevented
Bob from transmitting his electronic presence over the distance between
where his intelligence was stored on the Creeper V and Iria's location a
system away. Forced to wait in silence above the moon, Kei asked him to keep
them alerted to anything happening in orbit where the 'Destiny' was located.
So far there had been no suspicious activity, not that Yuri thought there
would be. It was unlikely Killgore would want there to be any major action
undertaken without him being present. Still, being unnecessarily cautious
was better than being unnecessarily dead.
Kei picked up her top and began tying it on. "I'm thirsty. Want anything
>from the bar?"
"No thanks. And try not to get too loaded," Yuri teased.
Kei turned around long enough to make sure Yuri saw her stick her tongue out
before opening the door from their private area and beginning the trek to
the bar next to the pool. As she entered the pool area, she noticed a couple
of Killgore's mercenaries lounging about. Kei didn't know the name of the
shorter, stockier of the pair, but Cross had readily painfully familiar as a
near permanent attachment to Killgore. He was dressed in a pair of skintight
trunks that showed he had nothing to be ashamed of in the equipment
department.
$Oh, he makes all the boys blush and giggle when he passes...
He was a touch lean, but all muscle, not surprising given his
profession. There was a healing patch taped to his side, helping with the
deep wound he had sustained in their last battle with Zeiram and the chaos
at Holcomb. He wore a pair of sunglasses, which hid his eyes completely.
That made Kei wary, as she was certain that despite his face being pointed
away from her, that he was watching her intently.
<snip>
As Kei considered what to order, her mind drifted back to the last time she
had been in a bar, and the... vigorous events that had followed. It was hard
keeping Mikael out of her mind. As hard as she tried to think of him as
Iria's son and theoretically off limits, it didn't work in the slightest.
Even if she did see Iria as something of a mother figure, the idea of Mikael
being a brother just didn't work. Maybe if she had known of their
pseudo-relationship going in it would have been different, but it was too
late now. Mikael ended up defined as 'hot boyfriend material' in Kei's mind,
and nothing could change it. Not that she had to. It wasn't like they were
related, regardless of Yuri's constant 'incest' comments that she felt
compelled to make every hour. Yuri was just jealous because she hadn't found
a good man yet.
$Yuri: Actually, I had bought 'The great big book of incest jokes' at a
duty free shop in a spaceport a few years ago, and it seems a shame to
let it go to waste. Nothing personal.
Kei was so fixated on Mikael that even the guy eyeing her at the end of the
bar reminded her of him. It was probably because he had a similar build, was
about the same age, and had... the exact same face?
$Nah, that couldn't be it. She should probably go take a nap, she's
making connections that have no basis in reality.
Kei stared an amazement. It was Mikael! What in the hell was he doing here?
If he had found any information, he should have transmitted it to them. Or
maybe he hadn't found any and it was a social call. Perhaps he couldn't
stand being apart from Kei and had become infatuated with her. That made
sense. They could go back to Kei's room and talk about things, if that was
the case. She made a mental note to tell Yuri not to come back to the room
for the next five hours. That would give them plenty of time to reacquaint
themselves.
$Hmm. Better make it seven. And make sure she brought a case of water
up when she came.
Before Kei could say a word in greeting, Mikael unleashed that rakish smile
of his and stood up, walking toward her in a way that told everyone he was
man on a hunt for a woman, and had just found one. Kei looked at him coyly,
remaining seated as he approached her.
"Hey there, sexy lady," Mikael said.
A bit crass, Kei thought, but it wasn't like he needed a decent pick up line
with her. "Hello there yourself," she purred seductively.
$there, yourself
He bent forward slightly. "I know we've never met before, but I just have to
say I can't help but feel we belong together."
"Huh?" Kei said, wondering what sort of game he was playing.
"I see I've rendered you speechless. That's all right. Deep conversation
isn't what either of us want." And with that he bent down, placed one hand
behind her head, and forced her forward into a kiss. As he rammed his tongue
down her throat, he slid one hand into her bikini top and groped her breast.
The result was instantaneous as Kei shoved him backward escaping his grasp.
$backward, escaping
She shot up off the barstool and on her feet. In one fluid motion she drew
$Hmm. Think 'to' her feet sounds better.
back her hand and slapped him hard enough that it drew the attention of
everyone in the pool area. "What do you think you're doing?!" she shouted.
His interest switched to disdain. "I should have know. Just a frigid little
dicktease." He turned and walked away.
Kei was left in a near apoplexy. How could he have done that to her? And in
front of everyone. And he called her a frigid bitch because she didn't care
to be handled like a piece of meat in public? How could he have changed so
much in so short a time? It made no sense.
Kei was debating whether to pursue him and beat an explanation out of him
when she adjusted her bikini top so it was resting more comfortably against
her chest. It was then she felt a cold piece of metal nestled between fabric
and flesh.
It was at that moment that Yuri appeared, having changed her mind about the
drink and witnessing everything that had transpired at a distance. She
hurried to Kei's side. "Wasn't that--?"
Kei shouted, "I hate it when complete strangers come up and grope me like
that! Do I have 'wanton slut' tattooed on my ass or something?!"
$Drop your bikini, let me look, and I'll tell you.
The diatribe killed the questions Yuri was going to ask. She was caught
off-guard so badly that despite the perfect set up Kei had given her with
the tattoo line, she let the opportunity for a biting comment pass.
Apparently it hadn't been Mikael after all, just some guy that looked a lot
like him. While Yuri had never met the guy, she could have sworn the
hologram was identical to the man that had just made a pass at her partner.
"I need to freshen up." Kei snared Yuri by the wrist and hauled her in the
direction of the hotel.
"Why do I have to go with you?" Yuri protested as she found Kei's grip
bordering on discomfort.
Kei didn't pause in her walk. "Because I'm flustered and need you to help me
compose myself."
"That would be a first," Yuri griped as she was dragged into the building.
Xxxxxxxxxx
Mikael walked away from the bar, satisfied with the way the things had
turned out and that Kei understood what had happened. It had been risky, but
it was the only way he could think of to make contact without arousing the
suspicion of anyone watching him or them.
As he made his way through the hotel, wondering how to meet Kei a second
time, an effeminate, but decidedly male voice, teased, "You know, you really
shouldn't waste your time with loose women like that. It never leads to any
good. You should try something different."
The slicer turned to see the speaker was a man that was just as tall as him,
with an odd patch taped to his side. His head was titled so that he could
peer at Mikael from above his glasses. It was fairly obvious from his body
posture and the tone of the statement what the guy was interested in. Mikael
used a similar one when picking up women.
$Mikael: Well, I tried autoerotic asphyxiation for a while, that was
different, but nah, I think I'll just stick to loose women.
"Sorry, but I like collecting loose women. It's a hobby of mine." Mikael
turned and doubled his speed as he walked away from the man.
Cross pouted in disapproval, his eyes following Mikael's bottom as the
slicer all but ran out of sight. "Such a waste," he clucked.
Yurian, his teammate that had been waiting with him at the pool, walked up,
having overheard the conversation. "You got shot down."
Cross shrugged helplessly. "Happens to the best of us."
"I thought you had hots for the boss," Yurian pointed out.
"He's not here and I do need something to keep me entertained." Cross looked
winsomely in the direction Mikael had left. "Such a loss. He had a cute
smile. It reminded me of Killgore's." He shrugged helplessly again, then
switched his attention to the direction the Dirty Pair had taken. "Follow
them. See where they go and report any suspicious activity to me."
$"Right, boss!" Yurian sadi briskly.
Cross frowned when Yurian made no move to turn away. "Well?" he asked
testily.
"They're acting suspiciously, Cross." Seeing the assassin's glare, he
paled. "Oh, you mean suspicious for THEM. Right, right...."
Yurian did so, trying to appear as inconspicuous as possible as he headed in
the direction of the women's restroom.
Cross was considering what to do next when the third member of his party,
Vanderdecken, appeared, smiling broadly. "Yes?" Cross, asked.
"I found that old friend of mine who set up his base of operations here. I
called in a few favors and dropped a few credits in his lap, and he got the
$Mmm. Suggest 'he got this item' instead of 'the item'. Since it's
never been referred to before in the text, and all.
item for me." Vanderdecken patted a slight bulge tucked in the waistband of
his shorts that was mostly hidden by the loose shirt he wore.
Cross was impressed. When Vanderdecken claimed he could get his hands on a
gun, Cross had been doubtful. "How did he get it through customs?"
"He didn't. It's homemade," Vanderdecken explained. "He used to be an
armorer. It did cost me a lot of money to get it. The boss will cover me for
the expense, right?"
"Of course," Cross assured him. The gun really had been for the others'
benefit. It wasn't like a Samisdat needed a weapon to kill someone. Of
course, weapons tended to make things easier, and he had managed to smuggle
one past customs. He hadn't needed to, but he rather liked the item, and it
was a matter of pride that he could slip it past such cautious guards so
easily. He had to keep his touch, after all.
Something was going to happen, twenty years of assassinations made him feel
it down to his bones. And when things went down the way he suspected, and
hoped, he would be prepared.
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"What's this all about?" Yuri complained.
After Kei 'composed' herself, she made Yuri throw on a pair of shorts over
her swimsuit, then dragged her to the hotel's public access computer
systems. Inside there were at least a hundred terminals at various stations
spread throughout the large room.
"Where are the stand alone systems?" Kei asked.
"Over there," Yuri pointed to where a small number of terminals stood off on
their own. Some people preferred privacy, and distrusted anything linked to
an outside line. Supposedly the stand alone machines would automatically
wipe their memory clean after the hotel guest stopped using them to ensure
that privacy. The real question was why Kei wanted one. She got along with
computers about as well as she did with chastity.
$Heh. They both made her cranky, and something always got broken.
Kei used her room card to activate the machine. Within seconds the screen
flashed that it was ready for use.
"Well?" Yuri tapped her foot impatiently.
Reaching under her shirt, Kei withdrew the small datachip from its hiding
place in her top.
$Yuri: I know you like to show off your breasts, but really, isn't
getting a silicone implant a little desperate?
"A gift from a friend," she explained as she entered the
chip into the proper slot.
<snip>
While the Tormend Confederation were the ones that had bought out Tedan
Tippedai and subsequently acquired the cell samples of Zeiram that had been
kept in cold storage, the cells had gone missing within days of acquiring
them. YSC knew this because they were the ones who had stolen the samples
with the intention of controlling Zeiram and selling off duplicates as a
powerful strategic weapon. Yuri had to admit, one Zeiram was bad enough, a
small army of them would be impossible to stop with anything but large scale
conventional weapons.
While Anton Scorphious had indeed been the head of the Zeiram project, he
had been working for YSC at the time, not TC. His job was to create a
control unit for Zeiram so that it could be properly utilized outside a
laboratory environment.
$I so totally bet it's going to throw off his control, eat him, then get
ten times worse than it is.
Officially the research was listed as being a
miserable failure. In hindsight, it had become obvious that Anton had
successfully found a way to control Zeiram and kept the truth from his
brother by faking his death. When Anton decided he was ready, he returned,
using the control unit to retrieve Zeiram and began utilizing him to destroy
every holding of YSC's he could find.
<snip>
But the idea never caught on in the military sectors, the weapon being too
imprecise and low percentage to be regarded as useful.
$imprecise? I'd think pinpoint orbital bombardment with chunks of rock
would be old hat by now. And low percentage what? I think you need to
reword that.
An alternative use
for the mass drivers was discovered in that they were ideal for moving large
objects in a zero gravity environment long distances with a minimum of
energy. Their most common application was shooting mineral rich asteroids
toward spaceborne mineral processors, or into a planet's orbit instead of
using the more expensive option of towing all of them to a specific area.
However, the power of a mass driver was sufficient to fire Argus deep enough
into a planet's crust to trigger the liquid's effect. Worse, mass drivers
were compact enough that they could be fired from a small freighter, with a
few modifications. They could even be fired from the upper atmosphere and
enter the planet deep enough to make the liquid effective. Penetration,
rather than widescale damage, was what the projectiles were designed for.
While the projectiles would be easy to shoot down, one had to be aware of
their presence first. With the retrieval of the chemicals at Holcomb
Complex, all that was needed now was a mass driver, and Anton would have a
highly compact mobile weapon system capable of destroying an entire planet.
True, he only had enough liquid to destroy nine planets, but that was still
nine planets. Even the pair had only managed three, and Eden had a very
small population.
$Just to put things in perspective. Can't have the reader thinking the
pair is more destructive overall.
Not that any of the incidents were their fault in the
first place. Given his hated of YSC, Anton would undoubtedly target the many
headquarters the company had stationed on densely populated planets.
<snip>
For years YSC had secretly recruited and trained people extensively for the
purpose of industrial espionage and assassination. While they hardly had a
monopoly on such -every planet in the galaxy had people that chose either or
both for a career-it was the numbers YSC dealt with that were truly
$career- it
Although I'm not sure I care for the use of dashes like that, I'm not
complaining.
astounding. They had trained and inserted over two thousand people in
strategic companies and locations spread across the galaxy.
$Nothing like planning ahead for the company's economic and political
future. Someone had some foresight.
Even the agents themselves had no idea how many there were, or who they
really reported to. They were trained in squads of about a dozen members,
and were led to believe there were only a handful of agents outside of
<snip>
Between that, and several of the smaller communication corporations that had
fallen to the same tactics, YSC had total control of ninety-three percent of
the interstellar communications network. They knew everything that happened
anywhere and at any time. And they acted on it. According to the data Mikael
had gathered, they had used the information to commit every crime there was
>from blackmail to murder. They had manipulated corporations and governments
to do their bidding, even controlling entire economies, all to YSC's
benefit. There were even plans to try to limit the effectiveness of the 3WA,
if not eliminate it altogether.
It was by far the largest conspiracy the galaxy had ever seen.
$But of course, now they've lost control of Zeiram. And he's always
been an impressive force of destruction.
"So that's how they prevented us from sending the information to
headquarters, and why people and fighters kept coming out of the woodwork
after us," Yuri said as they finished reading the information. "My god, I
can't believe they're managed to do all of this."
"Information is a universal commodity. It's more reliable than any currency
out there," Kei said in an unusually philosophical moment.
"You were right about Killgore, too," Yuri admitted. "Sorry for doubting you
and Iria."
"Now we have to figure out what to do." Kei grabbed the data chip from the
terminal and placed it back in her bikini top.
$Never knew when she was going to run into Mikael again, and a little
extra volume never hurt anyone.
"We have to get in touch with
Iria somehow, and it'll have to be in person, since we can't trust
communications. We try sending what we just found out to her, and YSC will
know we know, and kill us before we can get off the planet."
"If we leave right now, Cross and company will get suspicious," Yuri pointed
out. "Especially since I saw one of the guys spying on us while we were in
here."
Kei considered that. "We'll keep playing tourist for a couple more hours,
then claim we have to go back to the Lovely Angel and update the 3WA on
what's been happening. They know our transmissions will never get there
anyway, so it won't worry them."
"Sounds like a plan," Yuri said. "I'll go back out at poolside."
"And I'll wander around the hotel. Maybe hit the steam bath or something."
"See you later," Yuri said, acting casual while feeling the exact opposite.
Once they made it back to the Lovely Angel, and didn't have to worry about
people spying on them, they were going to have to figure a way to get Iria
and back to 3WA headquarters to report to them in person about YSC's
sinister plot. This was way bigger than Zeiram. Possibly bigger than any
case Yuri had been involved in.
$Nothing like the potential for the biggest disaster ever to really get
her blood flowing.
If only Iria hadn't already left, they could
have cooked up some excuse to split up with Killgore and then gone on their
own way. As it was, Yuri wasn't sure what they could do to rendezvous with
Iria while giving Killgore and company the slip.
<snip>
Cross was imagining what he would do with that kind of money when he
received the picture of the slicer.
"Shit!" he cursed. He stopped reading and reopened a line to the Destiny.
"Listen to me. The target has made contact with the Dirty Pair, and the
information has been compromised. You will immediately leave orbit. If
anyone questions you, claim you have to send a deep space transmission to
Killgore and planetary radiation is effecting our equipment. You will
undergo reconfiguration and return from a different vector an hour later. If
either I or the others do not contact you upon your return, destroy the
Lovely Angel and the Creeper. Then use Neutron 2F weaponry to level this
entire area. Leave a message claiming you're from the Naturists and this is
a blow of floral freedom. They've wanted Xyphos 13 returned to its original
condition and that all humans should be off planet. They've made threats
about blowing things up here before. That should work. Afterward contact
Killgore and tell him everything that happened."
The officer said, "If we hit the area with a 2F Neutron , it'll kill you."
"If we don't contact you, it'll mean we're already dead. Cross out." He
looked to Yurian. "You and Vanderdecken eliminate Kei. I'll take Yuri, then
deal with the slicer."
$Oh, great. Someone trying to kill Kei and Yuri. That should make them
happy.
"He's the one the that's got the price tag," Yurian pointed out.
"He's the least dangerous at this point. And this is a Tangerine Mission.
Eliminate the target at all costs. I don't care who else you have to kill,
just do it."
Yurian shook his head sadly. "What a waste. Both of them are nice pieces of
ass."
$Cross: So is Mikael, but you don't see me bitching about having to kill
him, do you? Get to work.
"They're a pestilence to the universe that have left an untold body count in
their wake. Remember that when you're thinking of what you'd like to do to
them."
"Good point," Yurian admitted. He slipped into a more professional mood as
his face tightened. He called Vanderdecken to get Kei's current location.
Xxxxxxxxx
It took only minutes for Yurian to arrive at Vanderdecken's position. He was
lounging about around a corner, able to see around it courtesy of a full
length mirror on a nearby wall. He was trying to appear casual as he flipped
through an old-style newspaper, old because it actually used paper made from
trees.
$Streisand trees, actually, another one of the many species of audible
flora. Almost universally reviled, they were currently being harvested
into extinction to insure a steady supply of newspapers, toilet paper,
and post it notes.
While feigning interest in the local sports scene, Vanderdecken stole
glances in the mirror, which reflected the entryway to the hotel's sauna.
<snip>
It was then Mikael spotted a second man hidden around the corner nearest to
Kei, watching a mirror intently, despite having a newspaper in hand. It took
Mikael a second to realize given the man's positioning he was probably
eavesdropping on Kei and the stocky man. Suspicions aroused, Mikael watched
the newspaper man closely. That was how he saw what was unmistakably the
barrel of a small handgun poke out from the folds of newspaper the man was
carrying.
Lacking a weapon of his own, Mikael grabbed the nearest thing he could use
as one: a small end table that was decorated with a vase that held a number
of brightly colored flowers poking out of the top. Moving as fast as he
dared without making a noise, the slicer took the vase off and set it down
on the floor.
$Fortunately, they were hothouse grown imports, or they might have
complained at the movement.
He picked up the end table, delighted at the lightweight metal
it was composed of. While it was hard, it couldn't weigh more than five
pounds. It was the best he could do, given the situation. Taking a deep
breath, he darted around the corner.
Xxxxxxxxx
<snip>
Rather than let her continue moving her head, (causing the painful side
effect of making Yurian hit the unyielding floor hard enough to nearly break
his hand) his other hand shot out and snared Kei by the neck. Preventing her
$See, there you used parentheses to set off a side thought.
>from moving out of the way, he raised his arm up a second time, intent on
caving in her skull.
As Yurian drew back his fist, he rose up slightly so that he could get more
force behind the blow. In doing so, he increased the distance between his
body and Kei's. In an amazing display of contortionism and flexibility, Kei
managed to bring her legs up into her chest, then lashed out with them.
Rather than kicking Yurian in the face, she wrapped her legs around him,
getting his neck between her knees and locking her ankles behind his head.
Yurian realized the danger he was in as her powerful legs began squeezing.
He released his hold on her neck, but Kei was quick to react by immobilizing
the limb using both her hands on his wrist and locking it into place. Yurian
tried rolling away, hoping to work his way free, but Kei's leglock remained
firm, the pressure increasing.
Yurian thought he felt her body shift to the right, and started to move with
it in the hopes he could use the momentum to free himself, when she switched
directions and pulled the other way. With his body going one way and her
legs the other, his vertebrae snapped with an audible crack.
Hearing the crack and seeing her foe's head twisted at an angle not
conductive to life, Kei let out a loud gasp of air and allowed the body to
fall limply to the floor. She released her legs and lay flat on back,
gasping and heaving to catch her breath.
"You know, seeing a sight like that is almost worth dying for," Mikael said
as he approached her.
Kei wondered what he was talking about until she realized that in the course
of the struggle, the tie on her robe had loosened. When she wrapped her legs
around Yurian's neck, her robe had fallen free from her waist, leaving her
nude save for her arms, which were still in the robe's sleeves.
$Yurian almost ended up with a close view of heaven. That could have
been distracting.
Given her previous encounter with Mikael, rather than blushing and
tightening the robe, she posed seductively for his benefit.
$Nice to see some people know when to be proud of themselves.
"If we had more
time, I'd show you what heaven's really like. I..." Kei suddenly paled.
"Yuri!"
Mikael's easygoing attitude disappeared. "What about her?"
Kei rose to her feet, tightening the robe and taking the gun from Mikael's
hands. "If these guys are trying to kill me, they'll be going after her as
well."
"How many are left?" Mikael asked.
Kei checked the firearm's ammunition. "Only one, but he's the most dangerous
of them all. A Samisdat. I'm not sure if I can take him down, which means
Yuri doesn't have a chance alone. We have to hurry!"
$Heh, half expected Yuri to accidentally wipe the floor with him, but
he's a serious assassin and as such doesn't get an embarrassing defeat.
The pair raced down the hallway as fast as they could, heading for the pool.
xxxxxxxxxxxxx
Yuri lay on her back once again, pretending to relax under the sun as she
weighed her options carefully. Retrieving Iria first was really the only
choice they had. You couldn't abandon a comrade in the field; it just wasn't
done. That it was Kei's foster mother made it doubly so. Even if she and Kei
took enough time to pass the hot potato Mikael had given them to the nearest
3WA outpost, it would still take too much time. With that decided, the only
question that remained was how they were going to ditch Killgore and his
crew and not have the mercenaries try to kill them in the process. It was
obvious they weren't going to let them physically contact headquarters
anymore than YSC had. What she and Kei had to come up with was an excuse to
separate from the others, perhaps something about it being better to track
down Zeiram.
A number of scenarios were racing through Yuri's mind when the door to their
private area opened and Cross admitted himself inside. Yuri rose from her
lounge chair, body tensed. Now that she knew the truth about Killgore and
his crew, she wasn't dropping her guard for an instant. "What is it?"
Cross continued to approach, bringing up both hands to remove his
sunglasses. "We just received a message from Iria. They found Zeiram and
killed him."
Had Yuri been any less suspicious, the information would have dropped her
guard and let her open for a second. Instead it made her even more wary.
Adrenaline coursed through her system, making everything seem to move in
slow motion as Cross removed his sunglasses...
....And the frames and lenses fell to the ground.
$Kinda suspected that, since you made such a point of mentioning them
earlier.
He was a fluid blur with no wasted motion. Yuri could see the arms of the
sunglasses were in his hands, each one pointed and deadly. He lashed out
with his right toward her chest, but Yuri was ready, and brought her arm up
and batted the attacking limb aside.
The first blow was a feint as Cross brought the second one up, aiming
directly for her eye. Yuri didn't have time to deflect the jab, and more out
of reflex than design, brought her other hand up right in front of her face.
She cried out in pain as she felt the sharpened point of the arm of the
glasses go into the front of her hand and saw it emerge from the back,
covered in blood.
$Thought for a moment it might be poisoned.
Crying out in pain, Yuri lashed out with a kick into Cross's side. It was a
weak blow, since she was off-balance and operating out of instinct. By all
rights an assassin of Cross' caliber should have been able to shrug it off
$Cross's
and continue his attack. But chance had the kick land directly in the wound
on Cross' side. He hissed in pain and reflexively shifted his body weight to
$Cross's
He's not plural, so I'm _fairly_ sure the rules of grammar indicate it
should be that way.
the side, flowing with the blow. The movement made him trip over the lounge
chair Yuri had been using. He lost his grip on both of the concealed
stilettos and slam his head off the ground, dazing him.
$slammed his
Wounded and off balance herself, and acknowledging Cross was probably the
superior fighter, Yuri tried to flee. While there were no weapons permitted
on the planet, there were security personnel that could come to her aid. And
there was Kei. Between her and Kei they could take him down, even if Yuri
was wounded.
Yuri had made it no more than three steps before she was hit by a flying
tackle from behind. Momentum carried both her and Cross into the pool. The
breath was knocked out of her by the initial impact, and she reflexively
gasped a moment after she hit the water. Her head was submerged just as she
inhaled, taking in water instead of air. In the process of drowning, she
tried clawing to the surface like a wounded animal sensing imminent death.
Unlike Yuri, Cross had enough time to take a partial breath as he hit the
water. Far more cognizant than his foe, Cross' training took over as he
released his hold from her waist. While maintaining his position behind her,
he wrapped an arm around her throat, and locked it in position with his
other hand. He would have preferred some sort of strike to her throat or
eyes, but the water impeded his ability to deliver a blow, and she was
flailing randomly and wildly, making her movements completely unpredictable
as she slowly drowned. Strangulation was the most practical way to dispatch
her, since he now lacked a weapon.
$And it's slow and scary, always a plus.
Yuri felt the arm wrap itself around her neck and lock into position. She
had no air to begin with, and she was unable to rise to the surface by the
weight on her back. Water filled her throat and lungs, and her vision
started to go black from the loss of air. Her struggles doubled as she felt
death hovering above her, waiting to claim her life after coming so close
more times that she could count. She had to remove the weight on her back or
it was over! She lacked leverage or the brute strength necessary to remove
her foe, and she was weaponless. There was no way to free herself. She was
going to die.
Then Yuri's hand curled reflexively into a fist, but was unable to since
there was a blade still embedded in it.
$I would imagine that might cause her to cut her fingers more.
Using the last of her consciousness, she pulled the blade from her hand and
blindly stabbed behind her head.
Cross felt the blade effortlessly slide into the left side of his neck, and
knew he was dead. His arms slipped from her neck and tried to staunch the
flow, knowing he would fail. Despite the pain and the knowledge, there was
no panic. One of the last tests in order to become a Samisdat involved
purging fear of death from the psyche. However, it did nothing with anger,
and Cross cursed his luck, both in Yuri striking him in his wound above the
water, and managing to stab him fatally with the first attempt. Had she
missed even once, he would have been aware of her acquiring the weapon and
could have positioned his head below her back and suffered only several
light wounds in non-vital areas. As his vision turned red, both due to the
blood in the water and his brain starting to shut down, he thought of the
ignominy of it all. The other Samisdat would have made fun of him for being
killed by his own weapon.
$Aww, heheh. That always sucks when the other assassins make fun of you.
Then there was nothing.
<snip>
Kei released her breath, not realizing how tense she was. "Cross must have
been pretty cocky about being able to kill us if he sent his backup away."
"I don't know. He was pretty professional. I find it hard to believe he'd
send away his backup on the assumption he and two of his buddies would be
able to kill both of us. A lot of things could go wrong, even if he was a
pro," Yuri wondered.
$Wondered doesn't really seem to fit there. Suggest ruminated, or
replied, or maybe even added.
Bob's voice cut in on the trio's ruminations. "Wait a minute. A ship just
entered Xyphos space without waiting for instructions on what orbit it
should take. Its profile is different, and its call signature isn't remotely
like the one they've been transmitting, but I have a feeling that the
Destiny's departure and this ship's arrival isn't a coincidence."
"We need to get up there now!" Kei swore as she shut down the comlink and
began running in the direction of their shuttle's landing pad.
Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Lieutenant Armand Foillet, second-in-command of the Destiny with Cross'
$Cross's
Maybe, that is. Not sure.
absence, peered dispassionately at the back of the communication's officer
manning his post. The transformation had happened without a hitch. It really
was a remarkable piece of engineering the Farscots had managed. Not only was
the Destiny a surveillance ship, but it had been designed to disguise its
physical shape as well. The wings went from a forward to tilted back
position, the bridge could literally relocate itself from the very front of
the ship to the middle, one of the engines could be concealed, and two dozen
other smaller changes created a significantly different profile in the span
of a mere ten minutes. Even its exterior coloration changed from white to
black. While it was still the same volume and size, no one trying to find
the Destiny would look twice at this outwardly different vehicle. The
transformation had gotten them out of a couple of very bad situations, and a
made a dozen others easier.
<snip>
"Negative to both," the man said eagerly.
Foillet mentally sighed. Markham was far too eager to use the Destiny's
heavy weaponry. Were it up to Foillet, he would have had the man removed
>from the job, if not the unit altogether. But it wasn't up to him, and
Markham knew what he was doing it.
$I think you need to delete 'it'.
"Target the Lovely Angel first and
destroy it. Even shot up, it still has far more weapons than the Creeper.
After you destroy the Creeper, arm the 2F Neutron warheads and target the
inhabited area of the moon." He turned back to the communication's man.
"Send a message to Killgore, updating him on the situation."
Markham grinned at Foillet like a child that had been told he would be
moving into a candy store. "Already targeted. Firing now."
Foillet waited patiently as ten missiles fired in two waves from the
Destiny's launchers, all of them targeting the 3WA ship. Like the others, he
had no great love of the 3WA and its tendency to stick its nose into what he
thought was none of their business. Nothing hampered the missiles, and every
one struck the target. Foillet felt an immense personal satisfaction from a
job well done as the infamous ship belonging to the Dirty Pair was reduced
to thousands of bits of scrap metal, none larger than five cubic meters in
length.
$I bet they're going to be pissed they lost their ride.
"Targeting the Creeper," Markham said, grinning even more eagerly now.
Suddenly, there was a loud rumble from somewhere deeper inside the ship, and
it caused the deck to heave under Foillet's feet. He barely managed to grab
onto the back of the command chair to keep from ending up on the floor. More
groaning could be heard from inside the ship, sounding dangerously close to
the command room. "Status report!" he ordered.
One of the others shouted, "There have been a number of explosions within
the ship itself! Main power relays and most of the systems just crashed!"
"Get them back up!" Foillet shouted.
"Sir!" Markham shouted.
"What?" Foillet shouted.
Markham's smile was gone now and he began speaking in a distant voice. "The
Creeper has just launched a missile at us."
Foillet became pale. "Shields?"
"Inoperable."
"Here it comes!" Markham said, ducking under his console. Foillet didn't
know why he bothered.
$Once, when he was young, Markham had watched an important safety video
called 'Duck and Cover', which had stuck with him. Foillet had seen a
different one. 'Kiss your ass goodbye.'
Unprotected, and if the person shooting them knew how
to program a guidance system, it was heading right for their fusion reactor.
On a smaller ship like the Destiny, no shields meant they might as well be a
helpless cargo freighter that had "Shoot Me" painted next to their fuel
cells.
Foillet heard one huge explosion, then nothing.
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
"Morons," Bob said to himself as he 'watched' through the Creeper V's sensor
system as the indisputable proof of what had been the Destiny became a
gigantic fireball. It made the explosions that took out the Lovely Angel
look like someone had set a firecracker off in a tin can.
Bob had to admit, Iria's shifty mind truly worked miracles sometimes. He had
been leery when she informed him of her plan to wander 'lost' around
Killgore's ship, planting miniature explosives in vital areas, when she had
gone over to the ship to inform her ex-husband that she would be traveling
with him. Since she would be gone, she left the destruct codes with Bob,
just in case. While Bob didn't trust any of the mercenaries for a moment, he
didn't anticipate their betrayal would be so sudden and savage, especially
without Killgore to guide them. In hindsight, it was clear Iria was a
genius. At least that was what he would tell her, since her paranoia was the
only reason he and the others were still alive.
$Not really paranoia, really, she'd just planned on killing Killgore
after the mission was finished and wanted to be prepared.
Bob opened a channel to the women and Mikael on the surface of the moon.
They'd have to rendezvous quickly, before the authorities started moving and
detained them until they could explain what had happened. They couldn't
waste a second. It was their turn to save Iria the way she had saved them,
even if she hadn't been present at the time. It didn't take a genius to
figure out that if Killgore's crew had betrayed them, it was only a matter
of time before Killgore did the same thing to Iria.
$She's so suspicious of him it's almost a weakness.
It appeared Iria had been right the whole time, and should have shot
Killgore before he tried to get her. Now it was a race against time to
either save her
$her...
Or, Bob thought grimly, to avenge her.
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
[End Chapter]
$In the next chapter of Avenging....
Author's note: My god, a chapter that turned out shorter than I thought it
would.
$Luckily. Don't get me wrong, I love your long chapters, but I had a
limited amount of time to C&C this and if it'd taken much longer it
would have been next week before I got it finished.
Will wonders never cease? In any case, barring something completely
unpredictable happening, only two chapters to go (I think there will be too
much to put into one chapter, but you never know.) As you can tell, we're
entering the climax of the story. Hope to get the next chapter out before
too long.
$Looking forward to it, naturally. Only ran into a few mistakes, whole
thing flowed very well and was a good chapter. Nice to see the tensions
between Killgore and the pair finally erupting. Didn't expect that
Killgore's crew were all redshirts, well, except for Cross, but now it's
just down to the main characters. Fight between Yuri and Cross seemed
kinda short, but that's more realistic than a long fight, anyway, since
they're both going to be going for quick, lethal strikes. Hope you
found this C&C useful, I will admit to being a little out of practice.
Oh, and personally, I'd like to see some more Azumanga goodness. Missed
the opportunity to comment on those. Funny stuff, though.
-Ragun
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