Quoting Loki-L <loki.laufeyjarson.ffml@gmail.com>:

plan to pretend not to see her and lose her on the stairs.

I don't really see what is so wrong with what I wrote. It was a bit
arkward
perhaps. I ended up changing it to:

"Wait! wait!" she called out, dashing Ranma's plan of pretending
not to
have seen her and then loosing her on the stairs.

Oh, one more thing:  

losing




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