Formula For Disaster
by Dragonboy & Stiel

First of all, that was really entertaining. 

Some of the dialogue seemed a bit off, namely Cologne. Still,
it was funny so I'd leave it. The whole feel of the fic was
right on target. Fast paced, no intense thought, and Ranma's
day just progressively getting worse and worse. And worse. And
hopefully worse. I'd say leave Taro stuck to Ranma. Why?
Because dumping on Ranma is fun. Only real suggestion is keep
the fic moving as quickly as it is, and resist bogging down. 

Miashara

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