-yeesh, there weren't that many spelling errors besides uncapitalized

words. if your

  -eyes bleed from that you must not read fanfiction often.

1. There were far more spelling and typographical errors than you yourself
are probably capable of realising.

2. If you think capitalisation errors are excusable in that regard, you are
definitely not ready for primetime.

3. There's a difference between bad fanfiction and good fanfiction. Don't
strive to emulate bad fanfiction.

  I'm planning on writing an azumanga daiou Ranma crossover,

Two capitalisation errors...

  but i only have a vague idea, of where to go with it, i guess i

Three more capitalisation errors and a punctuation error (stray comma).

should start by saying it will be based on the anime, as i do not have the
manga,

One more capitalisation error. Also, a comma is not the right punctuation
here.

  the big problems are the fallowing, 1. azumanga is relatively

Spelling error: "fallowing" (following).
Grammatical formatting error: A numbered list requires a new line for each
numbered item.
Capitalisation error.

peaceful, Ranma is not. 2.the way of crossing over Ranma characters to

azumanga

characters

Capitalisation error.

  to get an idea of the whole picture though i guess i have to start
with the little things

Three capitalisation errors.

  4. Saotomes financial status (the summer home plays a big role in

Punctuation error.

azumanga, if the saotomes cant finance it there has to be a replacement

Two capitalisation errors.

  6.ranmas strength. chiyo chan is very weak and not athletic, Ranma is

Two capitalisation errors. One punctuation error (missing hyphen).

extremely athletic, although Ranma would be weaker she could easily
take down most opponents arguably and depending on the time Ranma makes

Run-on sentence.

the change, how should Ranma handle his strength, show it off? hide it?

Capitalisation error.

  7.attire, Ranma wouldn't even wear the boys uniform in school, is

Capitalisation error.

  8.Fiancees appear in azumanga? should they appear? why and how? (note
regardless of this Ryouga will make an appearance. he gets lost to
often not too.)

Three capitalisation errors. Word usage error. ("too" instead of "to").

  9.lock of the curse. should Ranma be locked

Two capitalisation errors, one punctuation error.

  yeah, its a lot to ask for ideas and solutions to practically 10
problems, even if an answer to one might solve another. but i hope you

guys

can help me out.

Two capitalisation errors.

a lot of people stop reading fan fiction because of
plot holes or pathetic reasoning (i know I do.)

Three capitalisation errors.

  for events, I want the chain of events to be believable.

And one more capitalisation error.

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