[FFML] [AMG][Songfic][WAFF] Always Forever

[JusenkyoGuide]

All in all, I liked it. Of course I also love both AMG and you managed
to pick one of my all time favorite songs so I might be slightly
biased.

Of course that doesn't stop me from being nit picky, so on to th nit pickiness.


> *******
>
> Always Forever
>
> a songfic by Robert Atendido
>
> *******
>
*snip*
> Keiichi was a bit alarmed at this.  "Uh, Chihiro, you've had a few
> yourself --"
>
> "Nonshense!  I'm still perfectly good to drive!  No amount of alcohol
> can take away MY elite driving skills!"  This statement was belied by
> the odd angle that Chihiro was standing at.
>
Just as a cultural nit pick, Japan has a zero BAC limit and very, VERY
strict DUI laws (As in fines running into the millions of yen and jail
time if you drive and a very harsh fine if you knowingly let someone
who has been drinking drive). Maybe having Keiichi mention this before
offering the room?

*snip*
> Urd entered the room at that point.  "Gotcha covered," she said, and
> grabbed the bottle from Belldandy.  She proceeded to fill the glasses on
> the tray from another bottle she carried in with her.  Everyone took a
> glass, even Skuld, who had chosen that moment to emerge from hiding in
> her room.
>
Hmm... It would seem odd that after what happened, and given that Bell
is a big tea drinker, that they would have coke lying in the house
anyway. Mayhaps a line about grabbing a bottle brought by a guest? It
would make it more of an accident on Urd's part than something she
planned deliberately.

*Snipage*
And the rest is purely WAFFY, but I's likes it. Thanks for the warm
pick-me-up this very cold morning.

JG (Still alive, barely)
-- 
Guide of the Training Grounds of Accursed Springs

To those who feel, life is a tragedy, to those who think, it's a comedy.