[FFML] [Sailor Moon] Double Exposure 2 [Dark/Comedy]

[Paul Durant]

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Subject: Re: [FFML] [Sailor Moon] Double Exposure 2 [Dark/Comedy]


>
> Just started reading this last night, so I'm sure most of this has been
> said...
>
> There are A LOT of mistakes in this story, and I do mean a LOT.
>

Nope. Not by anyone who isn't me, anyway. So please, by all means, mention
more of them.

> Most glaring is the misspelling of "Makoto" as "Matoko",

Yeah, there's no excuse for that. And all the other spelling errors in there
too, I'm sorry. Since the time that chapter was posted I got a spellchecker
program I can actually use and isn't a complete pile of unusable ass, so
hopefully there's a lot less of that after chapter 3 or 4. I went back and
corrected the previous ones as well, but didn't want to spam the list by
reposting so soon after the original post just to correct typos and spelling
errors.

>and the line in the
> first chapter about the crossover characters not being able to understand
"a
> voice speaking in Japanese" that was saying "Moon Crisis Make-Up"--which
is,
> of course, *in English to begin with*. Admittedly, it's hard to understand
> thickly-accented Engrish, but still.

See, this one I think could go either way, because if you didn't speak
Japanese, you were in Japan, you heard that and weren't told it was English
you might well think it was Japanese too. But then again some of them do
understand it, so, I'll probably reword it.

>
> Anyway, I'll have more comments on future chapters as I find time to read
> them.

Please do!